I don't know how anyone can critique your work man. Your poses, style and line work are all amazing. It's very rare for someone to find their style as quickly as you have. If there were any nitpicks I could make personally, is that her wrist on her right arm is slightly thicker than her other one. Then again, I could be wrong and it's just because of the position of her arm, so my bad if that's the case. Amazing work as usual, sorry if I couldn't be more helpful. Every time I see work from you and Happy Doodle, makes me want to get Paint Tool sai because I love what is can do colouring wise and such.
Thank you for your comments! I will admit that I have improved significantly in the past year, but I know that I can improve on plenty of things and that I'll most likely be developing my style further as I get better.
And I'm glad I inspire you to try out Sai. Get it, you won't regret it!
Well, I think everyone can always try to improve themselves no matter how old we get, although it does get harder ^_^'. As for Sai, I am still looking for a version of paint tool sai that works for Mac. So far, I have not been so fortunate.